Developement of Thesis Statement


Topic:


What are the two sides of dead penalty, is it a cruel murderer or a just punishment? Can it be a deterrent of crime?


Thesis Statement:


Dead penalty its an example to dangerous criminals who wants to break the law, punish criminals with notorius crimes and makes a safer place to non dangerous criminals in jail. Its more cheaper than keepin a person for a lifetime, so resources can be focus in more criminals. Dead penalty is relly a deterrent of crime.


Links:


I used both links, specially the "unc" link, which has more information and is more useful.